For writhing today we worked as a class about show don't tell. Show don't tell means that if we tell a statement we have to show what they are doing or felling. Here are some ideas that my class came up with. Hope you enjoy. SHOW DON'T TELL
Lesieli
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The boy was hiding from what happen.
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He laid there curved in a ball like a hedgehog.He slowly took his hand of his head like he was praying for help.He sat there for a moment thinking of what he should do. He slowly got up and just stood there in silence.He slowly took steps through the mess corridor.
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