Writing test.

For writing we had to write a narrative using one of the options from different story starters. My story starter is Dead Lights. Here is My story, hope you enjoy.

Oi “Hurry up Mum, hurry up Dad” shouted Lucky “OK! Mumbled dad. When Lucky’s parents left the house Lucky called his friends which come into the house through the backdoor, David, Darius, Miracle, Tiria and Lesieli, are tiptoeing into the living room, Then Lucky’s dog comes out from his dog bed. All the friends are shivering with goosebumps all over their body “It's freezing out there! Shouted Tiria then the door slams shut BANG!!! “Ahhhh!!!” The boys rush up to their room and the girls rush to theirs. The boys start playing fortnite on Lucky’s PS4 to not think of fear and the girls start watching a movie. When the girls finish watching their movie They tip toe downstairs to make some dinner for the boys.

The girls go upstairs to take a rest while the pot it still boiling with the noodles inside, David goes downstairs to check on the girls but the

girls aren’t there so David zooms back to the boys room and kept playing fortnite. The girls finished taking their beauty sleep and they trundle down like a dying rhino. David goes downstairs one more time to check if the girls were there.

Suddenly the power goes out in the the kitchen David and the girls  scream so loud like a lion roaring and the girls hide while David is still trying to find a place to hide. The other boys rush downstairs including lucky's dog to see a body hanging from the ceiling fan, we all scream Lucky runs to the kitchen.  Everybody is hiding in the cupboards a black figure comes into the kitchen slowly but it didn’t know what was coming its way splash! Lucky poured the boiling hot water onto the black figure it made an ear pitching scream and it slowly melted away. After a few hours of crying and sobbing. We all carry David’s bloody body outside but again there's a black figure stalking us “RUN!!!” to be continued.