On my blog I had to complete this story. Hope you enjoy.
heard a loud bang. As I start to run I see smoke coming from the far end of the ship.
I ran towards the room where my patients are waiting to receive treatment from the
doctor. Just as I arrive at the door to their room I heard another loud bang...
I ran towards the room where my patients are waiting to receive treatment from the
doctor. Just as I arrive at the door to their room I heard another loud bang...
when I walked inside I saw all the patients dead
but I did not see anyone in that room with a weapon.
I heard another bang from the back of me I looked back and there
was no one there.I wanted to do something but I did not no what to do.
I ran as fast as I could to the other side of the ship were the other nurseries were.
As I zoomed in the room I heard another bang and all the nurseries were dead.
I just stood there in silents when I heard I foot step so I decided to
go to a room and hide underneath the bed as I ran to the room
I was shot dead and that was the end of my life.
but I did not see anyone in that room with a weapon.
I heard another bang from the back of me I looked back and there
was no one there.I wanted to do something but I did not no what to do.
I ran as fast as I could to the other side of the ship were the other nurseries were.
As I zoomed in the room I heard another bang and all the nurseries were dead.
I just stood there in silents when I heard I foot step so I decided to
go to a room and hide underneath the bed as I ran to the room
I was shot dead and that was the end of my life.
THE END
Well, then.
ReplyDeleteThis story took quite a turn :/
But I like the build up towards the end, showed the heightened sense of panic for the narrator You've really made a banger with this story (no pun intended)! :>
Good job,
-Willy
Hi Willy thank you.
ReplyDeleteKia Ora Lesieli
ReplyDeletewhat a powerful story you have made up.
Keep up the good work
Cheers Moni
Hi Moni
ReplyDeleteThank you